Making them up as I go (2)

1. Tell the truth.
2. Entice, or fail.
3. To emphasize, summarize.
4. If it ain't short, it don't work.
5. Be clear.


And so I don't forget:
Don't explain. Just tell a story.
Don't argue. Just say things that make sense.
Expect people to be bored by the writing, and shorten it.
Make the wording easy to take.

Remove Loose Ends -- the interesting one-liners that go nowhere.

Wednesday, August 22, 2018

"Infinite" versus "Endless"

"Infinite" is a practical impossibility.
"Endless" happens all the time.

Almost 70 years old before I figured out the difference.

Sunday, June 24, 2018

Sometimes you just don't need a "for instance"

From MarketWatch: Computers are getting more expensive and here’s why, July 2017:
“Vendors raise the price for both new and existing models,” she said. “For instance, a model A used to be $500, but the same model A with same configuration is now $550.”

Friday, April 20, 2018

Quick! What's this sentence about?

From How inequalities of wealth matter for consumption by Nick Bunker:
A person would only change his or her consumption patterns if his or her lifetime income changed, but wouldn’t change his or her spending much if he or she experienced a temporary increase or decrease in spending.
First reaction: The sentence seems to be about gender politeness.
Second reaction: I'm not reading any more of that.

Saturday, March 10, 2018

"at least I mean what I say"


IZQuotes

Which two of these statements mean the same?
  1. Every draft is a Bill of Exchange
  2. Every draft is not a Bill of Exchange
  3. No draft is a Bill of Exchange
Number 2 means the same as number 3. Number 1 means the opposite. Easy, right? You'd think so.

How bout this:
  1. Some drafts are Bills of Exchange.
  2. Some drafts are not Bills of Exchange.
  3. Not every draft is a Bill of Exchange.
All three are equivalent this time.

When you say "not every one of them is X" it means NOT ALL of them are X, but SOME are.

When you say "every one of them is not X" it means NONE are X.

If I say "all of them are X" it should be obvious what I mean. If I say "all of them are NOT X" it should be equally obvious what I mean. When I say "ALL of them are not" I do not mean SOME of them are. I mean ALL of them are not, and NONE of them are.

Petty, right? But if you don't know petty stuff like this, you cannot say things that are logical. And if you try, you will probably get things wrong.

Here's a clip from pages 215 & 216 of The Foreign Trade of the United States: Its Character, Organization and Methods, a Google Book by Lillian Cummings Ford and Thomas Francis Ford. At the bottom of page 215 is part of the phrase "Digitized by Google":


I don't know what the hell that paragraph means.

They point out that in common usage, the terms "draft" and "bill of exchange" mean the same. Then they say that "strictly", NO draft is a Bill of Exchange. I think they mean to say that, strictly, only SOME drafts are Bills of Exchange. But they don't say SOME. They say ALL. They say ALL ARE NOT.

I can read the following sentence, where they say "a draft is not necessarily a negotiable instrument". The "not necessarily" part tells me that some drafts are negotiable and some are not. So the word SOME comes in by a back door.

They repeat the confusion in their last sentence: They say Bills of Exchange are the most common form of draft (again implying SOME) but conclude by stating clearly that "every draft is not a bill of exchange." No draft is a bill of exchange. That's the conclusion of the paragraph, and that's what they want me to understand.

No draft is a bill of exchange.

Look... I think I can figure out what they mean. But if I am using their book to learn something, the only thing I learn for sure is that they do not say what they mean.

In fact, they say the opposite of what they mean!

Wednesday, January 10, 2018

Simple

Eric Hoffer:
There is no reason why the profoundest thoughts should not make easy and exciting reading. A profound thought is an exciting thing — as exciting as a detective's deductions or hunches. The simpler the words in which a thought is expressed the more stimulating its effect.

Friday, January 5, 2018

'words dilute meaning'

Eric Hoffer:
Wordiness is a sickness of American writing. Too many words dilute and blur ideas.

There is not an idea that cannot be expressed in 200 words. But the writer must know precisely what he wants to say. If you have nothing to say and want badly to say it, then all the words in all the dictionaries will not suffice.