Making them up as I go (2)
1. Tell the truth.
2. Entice, or fail.
3. To emphasize, summarize.
4. If it ain't short, it don't work.
5. Be clear.
And so I don't forget:
Don't explain. Just tell a story.
Don't argue. Just say things that make sense.
Expect people to be bored by the writing, and shorten it.
Make the wording easy to take.
Remove Loose Ends -- the interesting one-liners that go nowhere.
1. Tell the truth.
2. Entice, or fail.
3. To emphasize, summarize.
4. If it ain't short, it don't work.
5. Be clear.
And so I don't forget:
Don't explain. Just tell a story.
Don't argue. Just say things that make sense.
Expect people to be bored by the writing, and shorten it.
Make the wording easy to take.
Remove Loose Ends -- the interesting one-liners that go nowhere.
Wednesday, March 23, 2016
Le mot juste
"Simulation" maybe?
So ... if the word comes from the late 20th century or the 1980s ... how come the "use over time" graph shows more use in the 19th century and less in the 20th?
Screw it. I'll just use "sim" to mean "simulation".
Saturday, January 30, 2016
One extra keystroke
Without:
Readers of this blog will be familiar with this argument. For those who are not here is a brief recap of the evidence supporting our claims.With:
Readers of this blog will be familiar with this argument. For those who are not, here is a brief recap of the evidence supporting our claims.Go for it.
Saturday, January 23, 2016
Too many thoughts
Maybe it's different if you're writing fiction. But writing about the economy, I often find myself deleting an interesting observation, simply because it's the second observation and it detracts from the first observation.
Separately, they might be interesting. Together, they create confusion. Or so I think.
Separately, they might be interesting. Together, they create confusion. Or so I think.
Thursday, January 14, 2016
Dealing with holes in a Swiss cheese brain
I sometimes have a thought pop into my head, a one-liner that suddenly makes sense to me. It seems to be a direct quote but it must be a distillation of something I read. Reading Keynes, for example. He doesn't usually write one-liners. So I wake up one morning and say "Oh, Keynes said you can only either spend money or save it." And in my mind, the you can only either spend money or save it part is what Keynes said -- his words, not mine. And that's how I think of it.
And I've had a couple times when I went looking thru The General Theory for the particular phrase. So I could document it in my writing. Looking till my head hurts, but not finding.
Doesn't mean that the exact phrase is not in the book. But by the time my head hurts, when I give up the search, I'm convinced that the exact phrase is not in the book. At that point, I have to think that those particular words are what Keynes said, but my version of it. I don't know if that's correct, but it's what I have to think in order to proceed.
After that, I might say something like Keynes said you can only either spend money or save it. No quotes, so it looks like I'm paraphrasing him. But attributed to Keynes, so I'm not stealing the words.
It's a compromise that lets me move on to the next sentence.
And I've had a couple times when I went looking thru The General Theory for the particular phrase. So I could document it in my writing. Looking till my head hurts, but not finding.
Doesn't mean that the exact phrase is not in the book. But by the time my head hurts, when I give up the search, I'm convinced that the exact phrase is not in the book. At that point, I have to think that those particular words are what Keynes said, but my version of it. I don't know if that's correct, but it's what I have to think in order to proceed.
After that, I might say something like Keynes said you can only either spend money or save it. No quotes, so it looks like I'm paraphrasing him. But attributed to Keynes, so I'm not stealing the words.
It's a compromise that lets me move on to the next sentence.
Friday, January 8, 2016
No, those are the same word
It started out as a joke. I said I'm retired now and I might be going senile. But then I googled senile because it's not a word I use often and, you know, because maybe I'm senile. I googled it. The first three results were good. Here is number four:
First, they "explain English by way of Greek" (I wish I knew where that phrase came from) ... or in this case, maybe by way of Latin.
And then they say "senile" is
First, they "explain English by way of Greek" (I wish I knew where that phrase came from) ... or in this case, maybe by way of Latin.
And then they say "senile" is
in other words, someone showing signs of senility.But that's not other words. It's the same word: Senile.
Wednesday, December 30, 2015
The better word
I may have mentioned this already: My method of proofreading is to start at the beginning and read until I have to change something, then change it, then start at the beginning again.
It's a good method and I rely on it. But sometimes it gets to be days and days of proofreading and I'm still on page two.
(Yeah, this is one of those times. Counterfactuals and the Common Trend on my Econ blog, if it ever gets finished.)
It's hard work. But re-reading the sentence with the better word is always satisfying.
Oh hey, Happy New Year.
It's a good method and I rely on it. But sometimes it gets to be days and days of proofreading and I'm still on page two.
(Yeah, this is one of those times. Counterfactuals and the Common Trend on my Econ blog, if it ever gets finished.)
It's hard work. But re-reading the sentence with the better word is always satisfying.
Oh hey, Happy New Year.
Tuesday, November 24, 2015
That would be who
From Investopedia:
For the opposite case, see WHICH, not WHO
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Didn't know the Federal workforce was so small, did you.
The Employment Cost Index (ECI) is a quarterly report of compensation costs that is released in the final month of the quarter... All non-farm industries are covered, with the exception of federal government employees (which only make up 2-3% of the work force).Federal government employees are people. For people, we use the word "who". Therefore:
... federal government employees (who only make up 2-3% of the work force).
For the opposite case, see WHICH, not WHO
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Didn't know the Federal workforce was so small, did you.
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